Kiddo has been true to his words. He wrote a story this weekend. There is a pattern to it - but I think it has already started getting better. Do you?
Once upon a time, there was a kid named Smart Kid and an Astronaut came to his town named Smart Town. In fact the astronaut was a villain in a disguise from Mars. He came to Smart Town because his ice cream would melt before he could even lick it. So he grabbed Smart Kid so that he can tell the way of eating. So one day when the villain was not looking, he grabbed a rope and slid down to Smart Town during night.
The End.
Once upon a time, there was a kid named Smart Kid and an Astronaut came to his town named Smart Town. In fact the astronaut was a villain in a disguise from Mars. He came to Smart Town because his ice cream would melt before he could even lick it. So he grabbed Smart Kid so that he can tell the way of eating. So one day when the villain was not looking, he grabbed a rope and slid down to Smart Town during night.
The End.
I like it
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